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#samplesunday, 2012, author bitten twice, bitten2ice, Creative Writing, mayan calander, Mayans, sample sunday, writing prompts
I’ve been attending a writing group founded by author Bitten Twice lately and brought an object to group that was made the basis of a writing prompt. We had to write 300 words or less on the picture below. This is what I came up with…

Photo by JamieBMusings
Brent Collins dreaded its arrival. Last December 31st, while others were joyfully ringing in a new year filled with unknown possibilities, he was at home preparing for the end of the world. People had been talking about the calendar that was set to end later that year and all the terrifying possibilities that brought. A very cautious man by nature, he couldn’t help but get caught up in the doom and gloom mentality and began preparing the best he could for whatever might come.
During the weeks and months that followed, he meticulously stockpiled all the essentials. Each grocery store trip would include a few extra canned items or an extra bottle of water. He’d pick up an extra set up batteries at the store one day or fill a small gas can while topping off his tank. He even made modifications to his basement at home and began storing each item there, out of sight from friends and family. They had seen and heard the same stories he did, but always laughed them off, calling anyone who believed these doomsday predictions crazy so he figured it was best not to call attention to himself. They’d see when the time came. He just hoped there would be time to help them.
As each day passed, his anxiety grew and he would up the number of supplies he bought until the long feared day came. He went down to the basement and settled in, praying and carefully following news reports on the radio and TV. He kept expecting the appliances to stop working or hear stories about natural disasters any second, his tension growing. He stayed up late into the night, finally falling asleep on the basement floor. When he woke the next morning, everything was the same. Life went on.
It is really good and well written. You can really feel how nervous Brent is and it has a twist in the end reminiscent Of Guy De Maupassant…with the worry and sort of cruel twist in the tale.
That being said as someone who was born in Mexico and is somewhat familiar with the culture (I left young and am far from an expert) I do know this much. That round calendar is 100% AZTEC and the Mayan glyphs are very different .
Also as the common joke flyinf around the web…I think the Mayan Indians simply ran out of space in their stone!
Thanks for sharing it was fun and well written.
Thanks for the comments, M.C.V- Guess there was a misunderstanding somewhere with it, I’m not very familiar with them either. As for the joke about the Mayans running out of space, it probably really is that simple. LOL! I remember seeing one that said something along the lines of “This is really going to freak someone out one day..”
Lovely excerpt
Thanks for sharing.
You’re welcome
Glad you enjoyed it!